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Wise Old Sage

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Wise old sage how many years have you seen?
How many birds have come to rest in your branches?
How many a sunrise have you watched in your existance?
How many nights have you glimpsed a falling star?
How many scars give witness to lovers who have met here
Hoping to leave their mark upon the world?

Great old sage how many births have you stood here?
How many generations have lain in your towering shadow?
How many children have hidden amongst your plentiful leaves?
How many a swing has been hung upon your powerful limbs?
How many fragments of rope bear witness to the laughter
Of the youth that dare climb upon your bough?

Dear old sage how many storms have you weathered?
How many times have you braved the force of winds?
How many snowfalls have you braced yourself against?
How many times have you blossomed once again?
How many springs have you had to start anew
Stretching your glorius branches towards the sun?

And now old sage you have withered and broken.
Your roots have run dry and your core begun to hollow.
Your branches once full and strong, now droop, are brittle.
You have now come upon your very last year.
You've witnessed your last sunset, as have I,
And now, together, we both shall rest.
I went for a walk and came upon a huge tree that had snapped and fallen. Counting the visible rings it was well over 100 years old. Upon a few branches were frayed bits of rope. Carved in various places were hearts and initials. I sat down for a bit and wondered how they came to be there...and this is the outcome...
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Armodeus's avatar
Great poem! The consistent repetition gives it a feeling of strength, which indeed reminded me of the steadfastness of an old tree.