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Silent by *OctoberAzriel:iconOctoberAzriel:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Spoken Word


I've been silent for too many years
Silent words and silent tears
Silent thoughts and silent dreams
Silent pleas and silent screams
Silent aches and silent pain
Sometimes I fear I'll go insane
I want to scream, I want to shout
Let the silence come pouring out
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Something that came to me in the middle of the night.
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*OctoberAzriel:iconOctoberAzriel: May 19, 2008, 3:43:34 PM
Thanks, somehow I woke up in the night with one line of it and so then I worked off of it today.

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"I don't think, therefore I'm ...Invisible?"
My own quote

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~strangeXII:iconstrangeXII: May 19, 2008, 3:44:33 PM
I came up with something too in the middle of the night! Not sure if I'll post it though.
*OctoberAzriel:iconOctoberAzriel: May 19, 2008, 3:45:43 PM
I think you should.

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"I don't think, therefore I'm ...Invisible?"
My own quote

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~StaceyS:iconStaceyS: May 19, 2008, 3:52:42 PM
You're really good! :)
*OctoberAzriel:iconOctoberAzriel: May 19, 2008, 3:58:04 PM
Cool, let me know when you submit it.:)

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"I don't think, therefore I'm ...Invisible?"
My own quote

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*OctoberAzriel:iconOctoberAzriel: May 19, 2008, 4:00:45 PM
Thanks.I'm glad you like it.

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"I don't think, therefore I'm ...Invisible?"
My own quote

:invisible:
~popcorncomics:iconpopcorncomics: May 19, 2008, 4:01:35 PM
I like it, but I think you should have done something a little different for the last line, like use a word snyomounous to silence or maybe even employ a form of 'loudness'. I think it would have had more impact.

But its really good over all!

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I wish my grass was emo so it would cut itself.

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*OctoberAzriel:iconOctoberAzriel: May 19, 2008, 4:05:00 PM
Actually I don't even think I'm going to leave it like this because I actually don't feel like it came to a full conclusion. I'm still working on it.

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"I don't think, therefore I'm ...Invisible?"
My own quote

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