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Because too often we can feel lost
Shadows may come and cover you in darkness
But day will come bringing light and with it hope
For you will then see the path and the path will lead you
And if ever the path becomes unclear I will find you
So fear not being lost, for you will always be found
Something I wrote for *one-dryad...
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mylovebattlefield09 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008
You make me think of Hansel and Gretel.


Wonderful, dear. Really.
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
As it should because that's exactly what it's meant to parallel.:)

So very glad you like it.:hug:
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mylovebattlefield09 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
:blowkiss:

And it's A PARALLEL?!?! :iconnowayplz:

I believe that beauty magazines promote low self-esteem...
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:

Chyup!:nod:hahaha

Oooh, quoting Savage Garden's Affirmation I see.
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mylovebattlefield09 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008
XDDD


Yuppah! It's my MySpace song.
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:iconoctoberazriel:
OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
"Right now mine is The Sun And The Moon". THAT WAS A HINT!!! HOW'D YOU MISS IT!?
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mylovebattlefield09 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
*laughs* Baby, I'm awkward. :P
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Awkwardly amazing!?:D
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:iconoctoberazriel:
OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
AWESOMENESS!!!
Right now mine is The Sun and The Moon.:)
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mylovebattlefield09 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008
It EEZ AHH DEECCT TING.

Trade links?
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:iconoctoberazriel:
OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Indeedy!

Trade links to what?
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coolgirl101213 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the title,it really mach's the poem =D
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:iconoctoberazriel:
OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks hun, glad you liked it.:hug:
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coolgirl101213 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome :hug:
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:iconoctoberazriel:
OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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EgoRequiem Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2008
this is gonna sound awkward but what would you do if you ever find yourself?? we are constantly finding who we are, otherwise there be nothing to do! or so i believe
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
We are constantly having to find ourselves, but sometimes we get lost along the way. Sometimes we need a little help from others.
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EgoRequiem Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2008
yes we do, and we have to take the hand of someone like you and trust that it will be the best it can. and even if we fail we still have someone like you to hold on to! to believe, to trust, to love , to move forward, to ..live
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes the greatest thing in the world is to trust.
Maybe sometimes we will get hurt, but to find those who
you can trust, that really is someone special. Special
like you.
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EgoRequiem Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2008
yes it is!! like you too!!
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks hun.:hug: You truly are wonderful
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Jaythorne Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap: Oh, lovely! Very well done. =]
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:iconoctoberazriel:
OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes: Awws, your just making my day better
and better aren't you?! Thanks so much hun.:iconlovehug:
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:iconjaythorne:
Jaythorne Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome, darling! I'm glad I'm making your day. =)
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Your wonderful hun.:iconlovehug:
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:iconjaythorne:
Jaythorne Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Awes! You flatter me... :iconloveyouplz:
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:iconoctoberazriel:
OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I sure hope not!D:...oh whoops...flattered not
flatten.:XD: lol :hug:
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Jaythorne Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
XDD Lol, you silly goose. :hug:
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:iconoctoberazriel:
OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'm no goose! I'm a human! And a dorky one at that.:XD::hug:
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TeaPhotography Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Professional General Artist
:aww: wow, lovely well done! :heart:
You really are a talented writer, I want to get further into more. :nod: I will eventually. :D :hug: yay!
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:Wow, thanks so much.:hug:
I really do appreciate it and thanks for taking the time to read.:iconlovehug:
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Devia911 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008
I can sorta relate to this:aww: Wonderfully written, as always:hug:
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks hun, really appreciated.:hug:
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Devia911 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2008
Anytime:hug:
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Devia911 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2008
:hug:
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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Devia911 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2008
:iconbearhugplz:
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:iconlovehug:
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MissTooni Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Professional Filmographer
Would the breadcrumbs title be a Hansel and Gretel reference?

I really love this poem. It makes me happy.
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Why yes, yes it is. So glad someone picked that out.:)
So glad you like the poem and happier to hear it brings joy.:heart:
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MissTooni Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Professional Filmographer
Yup. ^^ The main character in my story ASYLUM is based off of Hansel and Gretel, so I know the story well enough. The "paths" was the connection for me.
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I've always had a great fascination with "fairy tales" not
sure why. Specifically the ones from the Brothers Grimm.
Although I don't write any myself.
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MissTooni Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Professional Filmographer
I agree. I collect books of fairy tales, especially the old ones that have that really good old book smell. ASYLUM really isn't a fairy tale, it's more of a mystery, but some of the characters are based on fairy tale characters. It's hard to write them because almost all the ones you can think of have already been done...
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah I like fairy tales, fables, and myths.
Always some great stories to be found. But
I'm more interested in writing psychological
thrillers.
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MissTooni Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Professional Filmographer
Ooh! Like Hitchcock? I like thrillers/suspense, but I don't like horror/gore.
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I guess...err... I dunno'. Basically I've always had
an even bigger interest in the mind and how people
think. The subconciuos, dreams, thoughts, and the
power of suggestion. I'm not exactly sure why.
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one-dryad Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much, dear Sarah, I am far beyond honored. I feel the very same way: breadcrumbs always, my sister. No more getting lost. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. Much love always.

:sun: :iconbemyvalentineplz: :iconfurrydanceplz: :heart: :hug: :worship:
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OctoberAzriel Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Your always more than welcome Dawn.::iconlovehug: Love you always.:heart:
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PridesCrossing Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008
Wonderful!!!:clap:
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