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Barefoot

by ~OctoberAzriel

   Today I ran barefoot. It's the only way to run. You don't know freedom until you've run without shoes. Without soles weighing you down. Or laces tying you back. Run without inhibitions.

   Today I ran down hills and across busy streets. Feet pounding against hot asphalt. Running through cool, damp, grass. Balancing on curbs. And jogging along walls .

   Today I ran down crowded sidewalks, shoes in hand, not returning glances. Silent questions hang heavy in the air. They watch me as I make my way down the street. I zig-zag past trash bins and over recycle bins. The hurdles of city life.

   Today I cut across lawns. Made my way through parking lots. Past schools, silent, empty for the summer. Ran past yards with inflatable pools and grills waiting to be lit. Through hopscotches drawn in chalk. Pink dust clinging to my feet.

   Today I ran barefoot. Ignoring snide remarks and odd stares. I just ran. Leaving everything...pain, sadness, fear... far behind. With nothing to slow me down. Nothing to hold me back. No boundaries. Today I ran barefoot and for those moments I flew free.

   
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Dunno'...just thoughts...

Might find it's way to scraps.
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Mood: Love ~Otaku3333 Jan 13, 2012  Student Writer
Wow! I love this! I would love to read more of your fine poetry. :love:

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"In a way... I guess that you could say that I'm the biggest Nobody of them all..." - Riku (Kingdom Hearts: 358/2 Days)
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~OctoberAzriel Jan 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much.:hug:

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"We accept the love we think we deserve."
Stephen Chbosky
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~Otaku3333 Jan 25, 2012  Student Writer
You are so welcome! :tighthug:

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"In a way... I guess that you could say that I'm the biggest Nobody of them all..." - Riku (Kingdom Hearts: 358/2 Days)
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and lovely thoughts too :D my favourite way of running!

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if you can't do it naked it's not worth doing!
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~OctoberAzriel Jan 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you.

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"We accept the love we think we deserve."
Stephen Chbosky
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my pleasure :)

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if you can't do it naked it's not worth doing!
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~Nameless-please Sep 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't say that I agree more, (though my mother never lets me run barefoot outside unless I sneak, and then I feel guilty...sometimes)

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Don't think about things-if you do it will only seem that much
stupider when you screw up...
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*becursed Jun 30, 2011  Student Writer
This is amazing. It should never go i scraps.

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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home." - J.K. Rowling
The demonic unicorns are after me. If they ask, I went that way. :pointr:
Turn to page 394.

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~Nameless-please Sep 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like your signature, It's hilarious and I'm so using it one my horse/unicorn loving friend!!

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Don't think about things-if you do it will only seem that much
stupider when you screw up...
(also, I do free commission work, so check out my first journal page for details)
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*becursed Sep 7, 2011  Student Writer
Haha, thanks so much!

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"Hogwarts will always be there to welcome you home." - J.K. Rowling
The demonic unicorns are after me. If they ask, I went that way. :pointr:
Turn to page 394.

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