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   Today I ran barefoot. It's the only way to run. You don't know freedom until you've run without shoes. Without soles weighing you down. Or laces tying you back. Run without inhibitions.

   Today I ran down hills and across busy streets. Feet pounding against hot asphalt. Running through cool, damp, grass. Balancing on curbs. And jogging along walls .

   Today I ran down crowded sidewalks, shoes in hand, not returning glances. Silent questions hang heavy in the air. They watch me as I make my way down the street. I zig-zag past trash bins and over recycle bins. The hurdles of city life.

   Today I cut across lawns. Made my way through parking lots. Past schools, silent, empty for the summer. Ran past yards with inflatable pools and grills waiting to be lit. Through hopscotches drawn in chalk. Pink dust clinging to my feet.

   Today I ran barefoot. Ignoring snide remarks and odd stares. I just ran. Leaving everything...pain, sadness, fear... far behind. With nothing to slow me down. Nothing to hold me back. No boundaries. Today I ran barefoot and for those moments I flew free.

   
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Dunno'...just thoughts...

Might find it's way to scraps.

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:iconshenhai:
Fix this up a little here and there and it could be an award winning poem. As it is, it makes a person think, and that's always a good thing. :)
:iconmylovebattlefield09:
Keep it out of the scraps.

It's beautiful.


--
I try on my blue shirt.
She told me she liked it.
She wonders what I'll wear.
She knows what she'll wear.
She always wears blue.
So sneakers or flipflops?
Starting to panic.
Remember, she asked you.
Remember to breathe
and everything
will be okay.
:iconheartofwings:
Awesome!

--

"Tell me your name woman, so I know what to say when I shoot my multiple loads all over you."
:iconoctoberazriel:
Thanks hun, I appreciate it.:hug:

--
"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:iconoctoberazriel:
Thanks Sara.:heart:

--
"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:iconmylovebattlefield09:
You're welcome Sarah.

--
I try on my blue shirt.
She told me she liked it.
She wonders what I'll wear.
She knows what she'll wear.
She always wears blue.
So sneakers or flipflops?
Starting to panic.
Remember, she asked you.
Remember to breathe
and everything
will be okay.
:iconegorequiem:
i guess to you running with out shoes, it´s like for me running under the rain. where everything seems clear, perfect, no room for doubts, insecurities, flaws, just rain, your thoughts, the perfect moment and you..

--
If one cannot foresee the future, then loosing one´s way is just human nature
:iconmossflower16998:
no scrapping this.

it's too beautiful

just like you.

--
"I don't get it... How can you keep smiling?"
"Well... that's because... I want you to smile too"

:heart:
:iconstuffy-kat:
this is amazing!!!
it feels as though im experiencing everything written first hand :)
:icontyc113:
This is absolutely beautiful. I love this.

--
Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

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